Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
Monday, November 16, 2009

Give Me Call Comments

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You give me simple call
You will not face any wall
I shall stand fast and save you from possible fall
Take it granted from me as gesture small
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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal
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Balvant Barot 29 November 2009

HA! 'Friendship in life may look calm...' U r a Flagship in an ocean of Frienship where there might be a few Black Sheep which should not be a Hardship to retain Calmness... Thanx. Jai Ho!

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warner treuter 25 November 2009

Last line has an extra beat yet is a great line making for a great ending. Strom may pass I guess means Storm may pass.

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Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK 24 November 2009

Self affirmative poem. ‘ABHI’ [be fearless] …as Veda says. Excellent Sir. Ten Ms. Nivedita UK Please visit my page and comment &c. niv

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Chand Shikari 16 November 2009

You give me simple call You will not face any wall.you willfind me alongwith you..thatis how friendshipworks....10

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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