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* Commitment - Poem by Eyan Desir

From earth's furthest corner
To the closest leaves
Love glues the gap between
Two hearts upon a branch

In earth's garden of roses
The sweetest scent lies
Upon the heart of the
Flower in my arms

Darkness kisses our land
The sun opens her eyes
Chapters begin to unfold

And still the softest words
From my heart can not
Express how much I love her

Desires hot as the sun
Has connected two
Into a circle rich in love

Honesty is shared
Hearts can't be separated
From a beautiful bond!

All Rights Eyan Desir....
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Comments about * Commitment by Eyan Desir

  • Rookie - 281 Points Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK (3/21/2010 3:06:00 AM)

    ‘…From my heart can not/Express how much I love her …’

    Love is a subsubtle feeling … though poets’ try to express but still vocabulary is just on the ‘tip of iceberg’…and aptly you’ve confessed…. How much incapable we’re…it’s the aesthetic pitch of this poem…
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  • Rookie Yolanda Mbatha (3/18/2010 6:19:00 AM)

    'Darkness kisses our land
    The sun opens her eyes
    Chapters begin to unfold'

    i love the use of imagery used here... a sense of dramatic irony (probably unintentional) comes through.. darkness and sun.. i absolutely loved it. well done! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 215 Points Leslie Alexis (heaven Is My Home) (3/16/2010 8:13:00 PM)

    well said.. creative......... (Report) Reply

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Poems About Commitment

  1. 1. * Commitment , Eyan Desir
  2. 2. A Commitment To Love , Musfiq us shaleheen
  3. 3. Commitment (Limerick) , Kelly Kurt
  4. 4. Commitment , Savita Tyagi
  5. 5. Commitment , Kevin Patrick
  6. 6. Our Commitment , Hasmukh Amathalal
  7. 7. Commitment , Hasmukh Amathalal
  8. 8. Tantric Love [inspired On Reading Jay.P... , Angelina Pandian
  9. 9. Commitment , Barry Middleton
  10. 10. The Commitment , Satish Verma
  11. 11. Love, Faith, Trust & Commitment , Tom Zart
  12. 12. A Collective Commitment To Rid , Lawrence S. Pertillar
  13. 13. Commitment , Sandra Osborne
  14. 14. ~~a Strange Commitment! ! , POOJA LADYLUCK
  15. 15. Commitment , Angel A. Lockwood
  16. 16. Commitment , Walterrean Salley
  17. 17. No Commitment , Shiv Abhishek Pande
  18. 18. Fear Of Commitment/The Godless Captain , Jack Williams
  19. 19. Commitment? , Kylie Greenham
  20. 20. The Commitment Phobe , Amy Carmichael
  21. 21. Commitment To Suicide , lizzy smith
  22. 22. Loyal Commitment , Lawrence S. Pertillar
  23. 23. Commitment Is Like Cutting My Fingernail , RIC S. BASTASA
  24. 24. True Commitment , Edward Kofi Louis
  25. 25. Loyal In Commitment And Devoted In Deed , Lawrence S. Pertillar
  26. 26. Loving You Is A Commitment , RIC S. BASTASA
  27. 27. Commitment , RIC S. BASTASA
  28. 28. Commitment To Excellence , RIC S. BASTASA
  29. 29. Commitment To Reveal A Truth , Lawrence S. Pertillar
  30. 30. Pair’s Commitment , Rm.Shanmugam Chettiar.
  31. 31. Sun's Commitment , S.D. TIWARI
  32. 32. Where Their Commitment Has Been Devoted , Lawrence S. Pertillar
  33. 33. Your Conviction With Such Commitment , Lawrence S. Pertillar
  34. 34. Commitment Phobia , Rm.Shanmugam Chettiar.
  35. 35. Commitment , Marvin Brato Sr
  36. 36. Man’s Commitment , Rm.Shanmugam Chettiar.
  37. 37. Unwavering Commitment , Lawrence S. Pertillar
  38. 38. With A Fixed Commitment , Lawrence S. Pertillar
  39. 39. Commitment To The Resistance Of Truth , Lawrence S. Pertillar
  40. 40. Sticking With Commitment , Lawrence S. Pertillar
  41. 41. Commitment As A Tiny Sun , RIC S. BASTASA
  42. 42. With Resolute Commitment , Hasmukh Amathalal
  43. 43. Given Commitment , Lawrence S. Pertillar
  44. 44. Commitment-To-Friendship Manipulation , Walterrean Salley
  45. 45. A Few Things Of The Bjp Like Not/ Failur.. , Bijay Kant Dubey
  46. 46. Faith, Love & Commitment! , Tom Zart
  47. 47. Our Commitment To Life.... , RIC S. BASTASA
  48. 48. Sense Of Commitment , Col Muhamad Khalid Khan
  49. 49. Parenting Is A Commitment , Lawrence S. Pertillar
  50. 50. One's Commitment To Giving , Lawrence S. Pertillar
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