Give Up Poem by Trenton Cole Watson

Give Up

Rating: 4.9


Im simply so into you,
Although you think thats not true,
I think about you night and day,
Sometimes keeps me wide awake,
You give me solace in this life,
One day I'd make you my wife,
But still you think thats not true,
How much time must I waste? ,
Proving myself time and time again,
Life would be a total bore,
Without you waiting,
Behind that door,
I hope my love reaches out to you,
Or maybe Ill just give up too.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rajnish Manga 05 August 2017

Yearning for the beloved and anxiety of a possible parting of ways nicely captured. Thanks. You give me solace in this life, One day I'd make you my wife,

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Jazib Kamalvi 05 August 2017

A great start with a nice poem, Watson. You may like to read my ars poetica named as (Poetic Sense-1) Thanks

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