Saturday, June 30, 2018

Given Away Comments

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Not owned, shut out, worried;
As the tension rises.
Cruel minded, it sunk in deeper;
To the thought of never ending.
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Sasha Olivia Williams
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Bernard F. Asuncion 01 July 2018

Sasha, such a well expressed poem... well written tooπŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘

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Kumarmani Mahakul 30 June 2018

Cruel minded persons rise tension. But we need to shut it off. Forceful emotion gives pain and sorrow. Relationship can be established basing on love only. A brilliant poem is well drafted...10

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