Monday, January 2, 2006

Giving My Senses Away Comments

Rating: 4.5

leaning by you
I learnt to depend
to not trust my senses
because I’ve given them all to you
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Elisa Lai
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Ifedayo Oshin 02 May 2006

Hi Elisa, your poem teaches an important lesson that when we trust others, we trust ourselves ultimately, we trust our choice, so wea re not gullible. Keep it up, i like toread more form you

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John Tiong Chunghoo 24 April 2006

so that you can blame no others when things dont work out. it is the right attitude. you are in control.

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