Saturday, November 24, 2007

Glimpses Comments

Rating: 4.8

I strain my eyes, peer through the clinging mist
My mind can conjure up strange fantasies
surrealistic unrealities
I know are not real, but they still persist.
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ivor or ivor.e hogg
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Thad Wilk 24 November 2007

Hi Ivor! Your mind conjures up the best writes though! *10 *! ! Thad

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Sarah Loves 24 November 2007

I really like this one. I can understand it perfectly.

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Tom J. Mariani 24 November 2007

Good poems like yours causes me to squint at some of the memories that pop up into my head. Sometimes it's like a pinball. Sometimes there is that 'strange familiarity/With things I glimpase impressionistically.' An example is my poem 'Spent My Youth in an Alley.' Thanks for the reminder to keep glimpsing. Tom

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Hebburn.Co Durham U.K
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