God's Angel Poem by Parth Parekh

God's Angel



Lying on the bed,
Wanting to sleep,
Feeling restless,
I start to weep.

I feel sleepless,
My heart aches,
So I sit up,
And start to pray.

I join my hands,
And close my eyes,
And ask for intervention,
From the divine.

All I can see,
Is darkness all around,
I feel scared,
Cause I don’t know what to do now.

Scared of the darkness,
I pray some more,
Hoping that in this dark sea,
He would lead me ashore.

Suddenly I see,
A light ray,
Growing larger,
The more I pray.

So I keep on praying,
Because I knew,
It was He,
Who had come to my rescue.

Finally the light,
Grew close enough,
And I was able to see,
Who it was.

To my surprise,
It wasn’t He,
It was someone,
I had never thought would be.

With white wings,
And an aura of light,
It was GOD’S ANGEL,
With all His might.

With just her touch,
I started feeling nice,
Restlessness vanished,
And my heart was again fine.

I dozed off to sleep,
With her picture in mind,
And woke up the next morning,
All fit and fine.

Then all through the day,
I run into trouble,
At every corner,
I fall and fumble.

But all problems,
I did overcome,
With you by my side,
It was all simple and fun.

At the end of the day,
I again start to pray,
But this time it’s different,
It’s just not the same.

I thank God this time,
I thank Him for the day,
And then finally I say,
“ Thank you God, because finally I have found your angel on earth today. ”

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Cynthia Buhain-baello 31 March 2010

You have a great idea and the sequence of your 'story' is logical, and the flow is rational - not 'jumping' from one thought to another. However, as I mentioned before, you can make it more creative by adding more vivid words and a little suspense. A catchy closing line could also make it memorable, like the style of Dorothy Parker. David Lewis Paget writes very engaging narratives, and you could view his examples and get learn some important tips while reading his poems.

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