Monday, April 27, 2009

Golden Years Comments

Rating: 5.0

Black cat's shadow holds my vision in an angle of attack,
Attack at the back of my mind; frigid and black.
Pen to face, a position I find mself in over and over again.
Again to the saddened state with my face to this pen.
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Brooklyn Joy
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i agree, don't know the form, but well formed.. seems syllabic, didn't read, but itf yuo did do this, then we a in the part of someone destined for greatness.. nice

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Mel Vincent Basconcillo 27 April 2009

this is a work of art..wow 10 brilliant!

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