Tuesday, June 14, 2011

Gone Comments

Rating: 5.0

I am dead, gone forever
I wonder why this happened to me
I hear my loved ones cry
I see them suffering
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Alice Silvers
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Ben Burger 19 October 2011

I like the other poem more. This poem is good, dont get me wrong. It is saddening reading about how you say goodbye. And this poem does it well. Well done

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