Saturday, September 8, 2012

Good Beginning Comments

Rating: 2.9

She did not speak of it but I knew
the words she'd say if she could;
it was in the way she moved
body movements which showed anticipation mixed with a fear of disappointment and perhaps even failure.
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Lonnie Hicks
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Ramesh Rai 12 September 2012

indeed good beginning. nice compose. i enjoyed ur write.

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