Tuesday, May 20, 2008

Goodbye Comments

Rating: 5.0

I was looking through the croud and I saw,
Something that no paws not even one small claw,
I saw someone who I thought I did love,
I thought this person was sent from above,
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Sarah Harris
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PERSIAN NIGHTINGALE 18 October 2008

Stunning very beautiful sad poem 10

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Barbara Terry 20 May 2008

And that Sarah is the wisdom to know when to remain silent. Sometimes in our lives, we know who we are meant to be with, and who not to. This poem gives the reader food for thought, because we have all been there. This reminds me of my marriage that is coming to a close right now, because my spouse is way too controlling, and violent, and before I get hurt, I have to leave. This poem was written with emotion, and from the heart, and I love the soft tone you use in your chosen words. I give you a 10 for this, Sarah, and always WRITE ON! ! ! ! ! Love & hugs, Barbara

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Ashley Hart 20 May 2008

Very cute! I have often felt the same exact way. Nice job Sarah

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