Goodbye Comments

wow. this poem makes me wonder and think about lots of things. nice write. keep it up! ! : D

a solemn goodbye... Yet the day breaks and a new hope shines through... nice write, ,

Every sun that rises must set...goodbye is a part of life..a sacrifice...it exists to teach us a lot of things...it introduces 'memories' to us...yes, they, too, fade away...but while they're still clear..we dance with them...we treasure them. We may not hold them forever...but we can hold them long enough for our hearts to learn to be satisfied and move on...And then, after learning those...we just don't let them vanish or carry them as burdens...we can wear them as wings and let them spread to show everyone the beauty of their being. Smile!