Goodbye Poem by Patrick Calleja

Goodbye

Rating: 2.8


It was nice talking to you today
All the things we said
All the jokes we laughed about

It was nice seeing you today
All day we stayed together
We couldn't get enough of each other

It really hurt saying goodbye
We wanted more time
We couldn't get enough of that either

But what really hurt the most
Was you
For I did not get to see you
Or speak to you either
There was all the time in the world
But you did not use it
And as I saw you leave
Without saying goodbye
I felt it deep inside
I said goodbye

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Romeo Della Valle 01 May 2012

Impressive! A well penned and poignant write that clearly shows your great feelings and talent! I am very sure she wanted to see you and say goodbye but couldn't but inside she did! It is a very sad situation we find ourselves sometime in our lives but we must deal with it in the best ways! 10+++ Thank you for sharing and keep it up! God Bless You! Love and Peace for always! Romeo from New York City!

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