Saturday, April 1, 2006

'Goodbye' Is Not Always A Good One Comments

Rating: 4.8

My heart can no longer feel
Even the cut of surgical steel
Longing for the night just to sleep
But keep lost count of sheep
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Ali Kristianto Budiman
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Nimal Dunuhinga 02 April 2006

Parting is sad always.......a mild heart can bear up? Good poem A.K.

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Duncan Wyllie 02 April 2006

I always enjoy words with feeling, To my mind they are the only ones worth reading by the heart.You have shown tallent again in this and a poem is expression from another and may not have to ryhme.Keep up the Feeling! Love Duncan

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Emma Johnson 02 April 2006

The first stanza is brilliant. Susie.

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