Goodbye My Love

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Goodbye my love, it's time to let go
till we meet again, i tell myself.
As i say this, the tears run down my face
asif for everyone of them a race.
I cant help but think how good it used to be
Just the two of us, YOU AND ME
Goodbye my love
what does this mean
THE END
I cant pretend
you say you dont love me
that breaks my heart
it's killing me that we are apart
The sun will rise and the sun will set
but how could i ever forget
Your smell, your touch, those beautifull eyes
that could pull down the best of disguises.
I know its time to move on
it just feels so wrong
My pain in vain
im going insane
Hopefully oneday i'll be happy again

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Hung Vu 17 May 2009

Nice, Check mine out, You made a lot of mistakes and you don't have much rhyme in yours....Pretty good though....I understand how you feel. Lol XD..

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