Sunday, July 23, 2006

Got To Go To Work Comments

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gotta go to work
work work work wok work work work work work work work
gotta go to work
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Ashley Jones
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Brian Jani 28 April 2014

I like your poem, work work

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Mario Rios Pinot 07 May 2009

I like this poem, how bold and brave. I like the use of the wok to sound like work, a noun the wok and the verb, work. Some people (Poltergeist) see below, think they are so cool but...if you have nothing positive to say, say nothing. Constructive criticism is one thing silly mean stuff is just silly. Write more, just write.

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David Poltergeist 09 May 2007

This is sooooo bad! You spelled work wrong, and the poem had no structure at all. It was just incredibly stupid. You dont put your name at the end of the poem either, its signed automatically. Dummy.

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