Sunday, October 1, 2006

Gothic Comments

Rating: 2.8

I burn my past
The blood that is running from my cut
I drink it
Like a devil in the dark
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COMMENTS
Ray Lucero 03 February 2007

Aldo, Yup...I agree with your favorite two...good writing, especially this one. Syntax is a bit strange to me, might be due to English being a second language? Not so much 'Gothic' as I feel in 'Tears on Earth'. Ray

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Prasanna Kumari 01 October 2006

the negative feelings in the mind is portrayed.it can be the feeling of anybody..... nice poem

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