Sunday, March 9, 2008
Goths Comments
Rating: ★2.8
Goths;
Don't always ware black.
Don't worship satan.
Are not evil.
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Greenwolfe 1962
26 June 2008
There is a problem in line five, fix the problem and remove this comment. Do it as soon as you can. That's all. GW62
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Coreena Dejesus
09 March 2008
what is normal these days lol. Good poem and no one should be sterotyped into a group. Thanks for sharing. **Hugz**
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2/25/2026 2:33:07 AM # 1.0.0
Hi Danielle, I like your poem. I'm a professional writer and editor, and think your poem would make more sense if you used " wear" rather than " ware" black. Also, in the line " Do not want to people" I think you accidentally left out the verb; maybe you meant " Do not want to HURT people? " This message is meant to help, not disparage your poem. Never stop writing!