Monday, November 10, 2008

Grains Of Sand Comments

Rating: 3.8

Grains of sand take command
As insignificant specks
Accumulate and expand
Extending beyond complex…
...
Read full text

Theresa Ann Moore
COMMENTS
C T Heart 10 November 2008

Same title with my poem though this is more expressive and a little vivid...great rhyming of words.a 10.

0 0 Reply
John Dohoney 10 November 2008

great rhyme yet its still something concrete that you can comprehend, a great combination

0 0 Reply
Theresa Ann Moore

Theresa Ann Moore

Michigan, U.S.A.
Close
Error Success