Great Insane Poem by maricel martinez

Great Insane

Rating: 4.5


I am not yet over hiM
Until now I’m suffering
Felt something cannot explain
No words except repenting

For me, love is like nothing
But makes me crazy being
Whenever I fall in love
I become a great insAne

How to be so true heaRted
If I always pretending
How to let go and proceed
If I keep on possessing

How to express my feeLing
If I retain it hiding
Feel sorry about myself
In past I’m still living

Hoping some will praise me
Instead of criticizing
'Coz he’s the only reasOn
Why my heart still beating

Loving him intend everythiNg
For love I’ll do anything
A plain purpose admitting
“I’m nothing but…..GREAT INSANE”

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
James B. Earley 04 September 2008

To some degree I suppose love is indeed a measure of insanity...but oh what a feeling!

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Marvin Brato 13 August 2008

Quite an emotional poem, loving is good but to be effective leave at least a little love for yourself! True love should not be a great insane but GREAT SANE! High marks. Write more.

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