Thursday, October 22, 2009

Greed! ! ! Comments

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She comes in subtle ways
The words of her mouth are as sweet as honey
Ready she is to deceive and convince
Just anyone who comes around
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florence owu
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Eyan Desir 29 October 2009

nice poem but it was not expressed powerfully enough..... I also wrote a poem called greed too..

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