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Grief

Rating: 4.7

It rips through your body.
Grazing, raking, shaving away all the
protective layers you put up all those years before.
layers you used to cover all the pain
you couldn't possibly show to others.
Grief exposes you.
shows everyone what you really are like inside.
raw and helpless...

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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Jenna Thomas 20 March 2009

I love it. If only people would stay so true and honest :)

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Andrew mark Wilkinson 19 March 2009

Yes it does londiwe, but it's for the best if you let it out, let it show... Andrew 10

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Subroto Chatterjee 24 April 2009

Amen. Cheers. Subroto

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Dee Daffodil 20 April 2009

No doubt about it. When we grieve openly in public, we are exposing our emotions....in the right company...this can be a very cathartic feeling. Hugs, Dee

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Joseph Poewhit 30 March 2009

Like putting a weight on our lives. Though it eats away our energies, because of the strength of it's feelings generated.

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Rory Hudson 26 March 2009

Striking and powerful imagery expressing a lot of honesty.

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Amber Vasquez 24 March 2009

Wow its so true. thanks for sharing.

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