Small Mourning Pieces Poem by Mary Havran

This words has power.

Nicely done. I am impressed.

Soft floating voyage through some of the elements of grief.

my initial impression...Wow! as one who has dabbled in threading haiku I can appreciate the effort necessary to craft such a compelling piece. I am in awe of the result. peace, kenneth

Very fine, laced with bittersweet poignancy

I couldn't put a title to all my feelings....until I read your poem. Thank you for sharing.

So gentle it is very comforting.

Another great poem, Mary you have a way with expression! Good WRITE!

As one who is grieving a recent loss I find great comfort in this poem. Most of all I find these words marvelous to contemplate: Someone, unseen, cares Patting shoulder from afar Dwell in gentle thoughts Thank you

You have a unique style of writing and come up with such novel thoughts.. Recipe for grief..Fold laughter into sorrow.. Make a grief souffle........ Thanks..