Saturday, August 26, 2006

Grimace Of A Delicacy Comments

Rating: 5.0

When he strums her heart strings,
The changeable expressions you can see on her face.
Once it's very painful and amusing too.
This rare fragile creature was not Rough clay,
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nimal dunuhinga
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Emma Johnson 26 August 2006

An exceptional title to a beautiful piece. Captivating simplicity of language. Susie.

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Nick Percowycz 26 August 2006

Well said! A broken heart can be dangerous to the one that broke it, excellent thought, Nimal! as usual- a 10.

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Sandra Fowler 26 August 2006

Playing with someone's heart can be a dangerous game.+Anatole France said, 'It is well for the heart to be naive and for the mind not to be'..Excellent poem, Nimal. Sandra

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