Guess Me! Poem by piggy symon

Guess Me!



What a beautiful structure you have!
An indefinite structure;
Changing your shape as you want,
First as dragon, then as dolphin, at last as fox.

What a cruel creature you are!
You showed me a cruel vision:
A dragon is blowing fire over dolphin,
I was shocked by seeing this vision.

You are not a nondescript,
God had created you;
He gave a wonderful gift to us;
That is you.

I asked to myself:
What type of creature is this?
Where it was found,
At last I recognized.

Yes, I found your identity,
You are one among the five basic elements-the sky
And you are a part of it
And you gave a gloomy appearance to the sky
And you gave us rain
Yes you are 'THE CLOUD'

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
by admiring the cloud's appearance i penned down this poem
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sina Farajzadeh 05 August 2012

It's amazing dear! Wow! While reading your poem I was just asking myself and imagining what this creature is? ! I was also afraid that you may not tell us what it is. But you told it and it's an artistic poem. Good one. By the way, your id name reminds me of two characters of William Golding's masterpiece, The Lord of the Flies. Piggy and Simon. I'd be glad to know your ideas about my poems. Thanks.

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