Gulls Haunt Their Own Cries Poem by elysabeth faslund

Gulls Haunt Their Own Cries

Rating: 5.0


Waves cradle the November ice that
Charms wrens into brides.
Winds rattle knitted twigs.
A broken shell...
Foamed jaws, weaving desperation
Into teeth, drag twilight from the
Shore,
As a chilled, gaunt crab stalks the
Tide's ribs.
Gulls haunt their own cries
Deep into March,
Following echoes among clouds.
Eyes from under driftwood search
Past midnight
And grapple dawn with
Snapping claws.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Alison Cassidy 08 September 2007

You offer the reader such a rich bed of unusual images from which to create their own seashore picture. This is a stunning poem and demands several reads. love, Allie xxxx

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Sandra Fowler 08 September 2007

Words paint a beautiful picture here. You see with the eyes of the true poet. I love the image of the gulls haunted by their own cries. Pure enchantment, elysabeth. Warmest regards, Sandra

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Not a member No 4 23 June 2007

I like this a lot Elysabeth. You've brought the shoreline to aggressive, nail bitingly precarious life. Gulls hunting 'their own cries' is something I well understand, recognise. Strongly and persuasively descriptive. xx jim

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elysabeth faslund

elysabeth faslund

Thibodaux. Louisiana
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