H Poem by nathan hitchcock

An enjoyable read. Ppl can be so selfish & cold sometimes when they play these games. Thanks for sharing.

Spotty structure as far as which lines you rhymed. Otherwise, you used good imagery and delivered the message quite nicely.

That's rough, yea? But I enjoyed the poem. At least one good thing came out of it. Keep positive and keep writing.

Maybe God put her in your life so u would realize you deserve so much better. Good poem.