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Spotty structure as far as which lines you rhymed. Otherwise, you used good imagery and delivered the message quite nicely.
That's rough, yea? But I enjoyed the poem. At least one good thing came out of it. Keep positive and keep writing.
Maybe God put her in your life so u would realize you deserve so much better. Good poem.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
An enjoyable read. Ppl can be so selfish & cold sometimes when they play these games. Thanks for sharing.