&& it’s just *another*
H e a r t break
into the
*emergency*
room, , __//3
A Girl &&
A Boy, , *Best*
Of Friends…
From Elementary
To High School, ,
From
*Beginning* To
*End*…
Through All
Those Years
Their
*Friendship* Grew…
They Both Felt
The [[Same]], ,
But *Neither*
Knew…
Each Waking
*Moment*, ,
Since The Day
They Met…
They Both * L O V E D* Each Other, ,
From Sunrise
To Sunset…
He Was All She
Had, , In Her
*Terrible*
Life…
He Was The
*One*, ,
Who Kept Her
From The
*Knife*…
Though Life
Threw Him
Curves, ,
She Made It All
*Worth* While…
She Was His *Angle*, ,
She Made Him
Smile, , __3
The One Day, ,
Things Went
*Terribly*
Wrong…
The Next Few
Weeks, ,
Were Like A
Very
*Sad Song*…
He Made Her
[[Jealous]], ,
On *Purpose*
He Tried…
When The Girl
Asked “Do You
Love Her? ”, ,
On *Purpose*
He L I E D…
He Played With
*Jealousy*, ,
Like It Was A
*Game*…
Little Did He
Know, ,
Things Would
[[Never]]
Be The Same…
His Plan Was
Working, ,
But He Had
*No* Clue…
How *Wrong*
Things Would
Go, ,
The *Damage*
He Would Do…
One Day She
*Broke*
Down, ,
Feeling Very
*Alone*…
Just Her &&
Her *Blade*, ,
No One Else
Home…
She *Dialed*
H I S Number, ,
He Answered
“Hello”…
She Told Him
She *Loved*
Him..
&& Hung Up
The Phone…
He *Raced* To
Her House, ,
Just A Minute
Too L A T E…
He Found Her
*Lying* In
Blood, ,
Her Heart Had
No Rate…//3
Beside Her
Was A Note, ,
In It Her
Confession…
Her L O V E
For This Boy, ,
Her Only
*Obsession*…
As He Read
The Note, ,
He Knelt Down
&& Cried…
*Grabbed* Her
Knife, ,
That Night
They *Both*
D I E D…
She Was Found
Lying
[[In His Arms]], ,
Both Of Them
D E A D…
Under *Her*
Note H i s
Hand Writing
Said…
“I Love Her So
She Never Knew
All This Time
I Loved Her Too”
.. //3..
This poem is written very interestingly. The title especially throws me off. I know this is a good poem, because I have to think about it. The plot was great and the ending was 'Romeo and Juliet'-esque. But, that's no problem because whenever two lovers die it is now referred to as 'Romeo and Juliet'. (That was a compliment) . Great poem! P.S. Check out my poetry!
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Yeah, interesting style (with the expressive punctuation) , but well structured and written. Loved it, overall.