Suva tuti huie neend ki adhuri khyab me
Sam ko dhalti suraj ki methi roshni me
Ratme chamchamati sitaro ke vir me
Maine tujha he yaad kiya
Ha maine v kavi pyar kiya....
Dur se ati huie koyal ki methi awaz me
Pass bajti huie sangeet ki har sur me
Saharo ki vir se ati hoie hazaro ki sor me
Maine tujha hi yaad kiya
Ha maine v kavi pyar kiya.....
Samundar me lahare jab kahi khojati hai
Methi hawa jab paas se gusar jati hai
Kahi pe koi kahani jab adhuri raha jati hai
Maine tujha hi yaad kiya
Ha maine v kavi pyar kiya....
Ye yaadein hi toh hai jo insaan ko kisi ke kareeb laati hai..Bahut badhiya nazm hai....10++++
It was really a great pleasure reading this wonderful love song. Your expressions are so nice and the use of words is fantastic. Thanks, Priyo. Wish you all the very best.
The art of coordinating imagery is praiseworthy