Lisa Elg


Haiku 1 - Poem by Lisa Elg

Undressed maple trees
sway and flutter like dancers
in the autumn wind.


Comments about Haiku 1 by Lisa Elg

  • (1/31/2010 12:47:00 PM)


    I don't care how many letters it's got in it...... I like it. I could see those trees!

    shirley
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  • (1/31/2010 12:12:00 PM)


    Very good imagery. But I should not need twenty letters for a haiku. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Sunday, January 31, 2010



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