Lisa Elg

Haiku 1

Undressed maple trees
sway and flutter like dancers
in the autumn wind.

Poem Submitted: Sunday, January 31, 2010

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Comments about Haiku 1 by Lisa Elg

  • Shirley Hanley (1/31/2010 12:47:00 PM)

    I don't care how many letters it's got in it...... I like it. I could see those trees!

    shirley

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  • Fred Babbin (1/31/2010 12:12:00 PM)

    Very good imagery. But I should not need twenty letters for a haiku.

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