Haiku 1 Poem by Lisa Elg

Haiku 1



Undressed maple trees
sway and flutter like dancers
in the autumn wind.

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Shirley Hanley 31 January 2010

I don't care how many letters it's got in it...... I like it. I could see those trees! shirley

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Fred Babbin 31 January 2010

Very good imagery. But I should not need twenty letters for a haiku.

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