Haiku - 80 Poem by Dagmara Anna AuraDagimar

Haiku - 80

Rating: 5.0


movement of the sun
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on the line sky-earth

is progress of the sunset

new sunrise in way

Sunday, May 10, 2009
Topic(s) of this poem: earth,haiku,sky,sun,sunset
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Maria Barbara Korynt 18 June 2009

It is very good haiku. Modeled on the classical structure. Very good!

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