Haiku: Junkie Poem by Kale Beaudry
Haiku: Junkie
Soul punctuated,
Blood flows faster and slower,
Needle burns the past.
Excellent haiku. Great topic and well said. Most haikus are Cheerful themes. This needed to be said. Susan
really like this piece. Being a junkie for editing things, I would probably rewrite it: Flesh punctured soul deep, Blood flows fast, then creeps-needle burns and churns the past. Just an idea, what you wrote is fine.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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10/15/2024 2:51:54 PM # 1.0.0
Think I should read lots more haiku, after seeing this one.