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Haiku Tanka Melting Moments

the door-bell rang
you were at the door

a dewdrop clings
to my eyelash
melting moments

Haiku Tanka Melting Moments
Wednesday, January 9, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: door
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Bishnu Charan Parida 26 January 2019

Your poem melted me. I loved it.

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Christina Chin 26 January 2019

Hi Poet Bishnu! Welcome to PoemHunter! Thank you very much for kind words!

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Mahtab Bangalee 09 January 2019

love has come and stand at the door snow dew come with the feelings O dear- open and look the love wants to hug you please greet frankly by forgetting the past

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Christina Chin 09 January 2019

Thanks very much Poet! Appreciate a lot, Mahtab.

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Paul Brookes 09 January 2019

A short insightful piece of writing very terse but meaningful Great write

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Christina Chin 09 January 2019

Thanks very much, Paul. Glad you like! Very much appreciated

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