Haikus - Poem by MAR HOFF

You slipped through my hands
And left a large, empty space
where you used to be.

The ocean's expanse
drags my body into depths
unable to see

Time of Day
The sun's tendrils will
moonlight behind a blanket
of security

Form: haiku

Comments about Haikus by MAR HOFF

  • (6/20/2014 7:28:00 PM)

    .............emotion as deep as the ocean....enjoyed.. (Report) Reply

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  • (6/13/2014 10:08:00 PM)

    These are really abrupt yet deep at the same time (Report) Reply

  • (6/13/2014 6:54:00 AM)

    its really good nd im gonna miss you next year (Report) Reply

  • (6/13/2014 6:53:00 AM)

    its really great nd im gonna miss you so much next year (Report) Reply

  • (6/13/2014 6:51:00 AM)

    this is very deep ;)

    beautiful imagery and word choice!
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  • (6/13/2014 6:35:00 AM)

    these haikus are deep man. In the first one, it seems as if the author wanted to hold onto something but instead let it go and it didnt come back. the second one is about an overwhelming feeling. The third one is about comfortablilty (Report) Reply

  • Gajanan Mishra (6/9/2014 6:49:00 AM)

    very good writing, I like it, thanks.
    please read my poems and comment.
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Poem Submitted: Monday, June 9, 2014

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