Haikus Comments

.............emotion as deep as the ocean....enjoyed..

These are really abrupt yet deep at the same time

its really good nd im gonna miss you next year

its really great nd im gonna miss you so much next year

this is very deep ;) beautiful imagery and word choice!

these haikus are deep man. In the first one, it seems as if the author wanted to hold onto something but instead let it go and it didnt come back. the second one is about an overwhelming feeling. The third one is about comfortablilty

very good writing, I like it, thanks. please read my poems and comment.