Monday, November 13, 2006

Hand And Hand Comments

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Laying underneath the stars,
On a warm silent night.
Your arms are wrapped around me,
And everything feels right.
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Melissa Lewis
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Muhammad Shanazar 13 November 2006

An ideal romantic situation has been presented, diction is quite relevant, there is a flow not only of words but of passions also, God may protect you from an evil eye. Muhammad Shanazar

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Howard Johnson 13 November 2006

Nice, Love write, I could feel myself gazing at the stars.

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