Hand In Hand Poem by Pierre Pabstel

Hand In Hand

Rating: 5.0


As the sun sets
Casting our shadow
Since the day we were one,
I've lost my sorrow

Hand in hand,
Across this beach,
We walk in the Twilight
Out of worries' reach

Lying in the sand
You fall asleep
In my arms
In slumber so deep

My feelings for you
So large, so grand
We lie here,
Hand in hand.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mohammad Akmal Nazir 26 June 2011

Nice poem. I liked it. It was written well with great texture and imagery. I rated it 10. Thanks for sharing..... Kindly read and rate my poem 'A humble complaint' on page 2. Best regards Akmal

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Pierre Pabstel

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New Brunswick, Canada
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