Wednesday, January 12, 2011

Hands Comments

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Autumn chill
blues my daughter's gloveless hands
and she grips mine in both of hers
leading us in a clumsy walk
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Pauline Fayne
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Miriam Maia Padua 02 November 2011

refreshing write.. calming hands, warming a heart.. I can feel the love between you and your daughter the attachment is vividly pictured-out in your cute and calm poem Very nice to read...

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Pauline Fayne

Pauline Fayne

Dublin, Ireland
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