Handwriting On The Wall Poem by Linda Ori

Handwriting On The Wall

Rating: 2.9


Words that splatter dark
Dry upon the barren wall -
Nothing more to say.

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Not a member No 4 25 January 2007

These sound as if they might be fateful and disappointing words Linda. Doesn't sound like an optimistic message. Stimulating 13 words! ! Not easy to achieve. They leave the reader plenty of space to inser personal meaning/possibility - reflecting what of me? . x jim

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Linda....Nice Contemporary, 'custom' KU! PERSONALLY I'D HAVE LOTS TO SAY IF SOMEONE THREW ANY COLOR PAINT ON A BADON WALL OF MINE...HELL, BEGGARS CAN'T BE CHOOSERS...I'LL TAKE THE FREE PAINT JOB..& SAY 'THANK YOU'....BESIDES, ONCE ITS THERE, WHAT AM I GOING TO DO...DELETE IT? LOL? ! '''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''FRANK/FJR

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