Tuesday, September 1, 2009

Happiness Comments

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Happiness brings me joy, love and care
As if every moment wants to propel
Power of excitement in which we dwell
Profound contempt that was so unfair
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Dolly Poserio
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Dolly Poserio 26 September 2009

thanks Asma! ! please feel free to comment on my other piece.. hope you like it.

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Asma Khan 26 September 2009

power of excitement in which we dwell. Nice writing.

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Nikunj Sharma 01 September 2009

a happily happening poem, , , , , , , , , , , , , full of truth and feelings...good write

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