Hate Poem by Evy Moore

Hate

Rating: 5.0


Bleeding pools of love once held
The infection spreads, my heart impelled
the soul slowly darkens, emotions decay
the unbearable pain i no longer delay
the sun once shining your love smoldering lies
on lustful revenge my heart now thrives

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Leo Lopes 17 September 2006

...Very vengeful work Let em know dude... Let em know they're not forgotten ;)

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Robert Howard 11 September 2006

Good job. I like the way that thoughts carry across the rhymed line endings into the following lines. Robert

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Dee Daffodil 11 September 2006

Ewwww yikes...this one is dripping with the stuff...pure... raw...hatred. Very well written! (Wouldn't want to ever cross you though!) Hugs, Dee

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