Hatred Of You Poem by Daniel Jones

Hatred Of You

Rating: 5.0


I Love pain,
I love to be insane
I love the adrenaline pumping through my veins.
I am going to love what im going to do to you
Without regretting what I do
And to calibrate the matter, I HATE you!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Michael Walker 06 February 2019

I hope that your hate turns to love, or something like it. Good repetition and rhymes.

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Chinedu Dike 26 May 2018

An insight depiction of the mind of a, well articulated and nicely brought forth with conviction. Really a poignant creation crafted with artistic brilliance. Thanks for sharing Daniel.

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Michael Walker 19 April 2017

Strong sentiments indeed. I agree with 'the adrenaline pumping through my veins'; ' I love pain', but is there a need to put 'HATE' in capital letters? A first poem, which you can advance from. Every writer has to start somewhere.

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