they sat there
their eyes seeing far
into the blue sky
and the sea below
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An interesting observation of a woman in a relationship with a man who is busy in so many different areas. Times are a changing and we may see less and less of this I believe. Loved the simple format and imagery of the eyes, blue sky and sea.......10 Karin
Omnipresence below up behind forward and on Ms. Nivedita Ten++ UK Thanks for comments Cordially invite to read and comment on Enigmatic Navel Lie Sly or other poems. niv
a beautiful poem describing the relation between man n woman....shall i say, around two decades back? ....and i dont think it holds good at present; as both are in competition for one upmanship, hence, both are too occupied in their own worlds...right, poet? ? ?
NOW A DAYS EVEN THE SHE HAS HER SEVERAL WORLDS...LOVELY
'He, in his several worlds she, in his world' Rachel Ann Butler