Very nice poem. Would like to make some suggestions (it's up to the writer) . Line 10 could be changed to read: the psychic scars we all bear and line 12: The burden of existence, all must pay the cost. Enjoyed it.
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Very nice poem. Would like to make some suggestions (it's up to the writer) . Line 10 could be changed to read: the psychic scars we all bear and line 12: The burden of existence, all must pay the cost. Enjoyed it.