Sunday, November 2, 2008

He Rises Early Comments

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He rises early, but for what?
Stares himself down in the mirror -
Attempting to win control over himself.
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Michael Hunter
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Lawrence S. Pertillar 02 November 2008

Nicely written! 'He Rises Early' to express gratitude for his blessings. Thankful to god to be able to 'rise' early for the purposes to do good deeds. And ask God to assist with the rest. I like this poem. Thank you, Michael.

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