He Was All But Twenty Poem by Saint Cynosure

He Was All But Twenty

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He lay there on his bed of death,
and wishing through his last of breath.
Just one more chance LORD,
let me get.
I'll do it right,
you wont regret.
But life is all,
if full of chance.
And once its gone,
you cant go back.
So make your plans,
and do it wisely.
The dreams you conquer,
must be timely.
As I watched him die,
he did remind me.
He was all but twenty...

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*Trusting You* 30 October 2008

hey hey hey... I'm the first one to comment, oh ya. anyway this is an amazing poem I'm adding to my favs! great job! I like the thoughts of the guy. Becca

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