Pain's FallinAngel

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Head Games, Heart Pains - Poem by Pain's FallinAngel

You say you were looking for love
I answered your call
You acted like this could be something
But it was nothing at all
Everything started out great
Flirting and making plans
We'd express our love virtually
You said you'd hold me. Love me kiss squeeze me.
Also swore you'd never leave me
I fell for the trap and fell in deeper as the words and actions became shallow
I jumped in and smashed into reality
You didn't love me you love what I did for you and the sweet words I d say
With my heart crushed
And I was in pieces
I felt squeezed up and tossed aside
I'm forced to see that all the words you said to me were all lies
I know you were a careful person and you keep to yourself but you said you loved me
Which made me feel like it was real
The only truth that was shown there's no such thing as forever
We are better off alone
~Kitty~

Topic(s) of this poem: games, goodbye, heartache, heartbreak, lies, loneliness, love lost, pain, sad love, sadness

Form: Blues Poem


Comments about Head Games, Heart Pains by Pain's FallinAngel

  • Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr (8/9/2016 11:07:00 PM)

    Prosaic verse requires special talent..When I was 19 I'm not sure I could spell prosaic, much less architect the above work...Aside from a bit of structural improvements that will enable your linage to be a bit tighter, crisper and flow more mellifluously...I like it, and you ostensibly possess the potentials needed to maximize what you already have naturally in writing quality Prose...Good Luck, young lady! (Report)Reply

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  • Gajanan Mishra (8/9/2016 11:05:00 PM)

    be careful and love, love is not easy to earn, right? (Report)Reply

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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, August 9, 2016

Poem Edited: Wednesday, August 10, 2016


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