Friday, March 14, 2008

Heart Beats Comments

Rating: 4.0

Are we pent
Vision less through
The heart beats;
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Nellie Isabelle Steward Cooper
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Howard Johnson 27 March 2008

Excellent word flow to produce vivid immagery, Thank you for letting me read Isabelle

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Robert Gardner (13) 14 March 2008

creative! and very effective, espeacially the last line. (feel free to read mine :)

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