Forever is a love long forgotten
In a heart made of ice
That can no longer feel
Joy for things has been lost
As the warm turns cold
For things long ago can not always be
Found in a heart of ice
you can do much better than this one, you lost me, however the first line is captivating, you should consider a rewrite
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
This is a new rewrite of my old poem Heart of Ice which was: Forever is a love long forgotten In a heart made of ice A yearning to turn the aura Of gold to black For things long ago can not always be Found in a heart of ice